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Evaluation G
RID/31
Introduction :
I’ve presented my character following the three common elements of an introduction: the background on the topic, or on the situation(where I talked about the context of this essay), the purpose or the topic (where I clearly indicated what and who I would be talking about in this essay) and finally, the overview of content (where I exposed briefly the main content of this essay).
/5
Body :
I’ve talked about my character’s past, present and future life (at least 2 elements each). I well settled the time, the place and the atmosphere of this essay. Readers will be able to find out my character’s personal traits, and to identify the reasons why of his action. My essay is plausible.
/5
Conclusion :
My character expressed his opinion, his thought or his point of view about a personal situation or his life.
/5Language :
Grammar, verbs and spelling /5
Syntax (proper used of punctuation, well-structured sentencesand good organization of the ideas.) /5
Length (it is a 350-400 diary style essay.) /.5
Preparation (I included the plan of my essay, as well as the sheet on the possible characters to choose from.) /.5